近几年参加托福考试的同学越来越多，获得高分的学员也越来越多，要想取得高分，就不能忽视每一个细节，今天宁波新航道托福小编为大家整理了关于托福写作的一些失分点，希望能对大家有所帮助。

    1.句子别扭

    例子：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.

    措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
    2.语气与文章不符

    例子：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.

    语气与文章其他部分不相符，可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
    3.动词时态错误

    例子：Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.

    动词时态不正确，检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时或者是完成时等等。
    4.结构不平行

    例子：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.

    将一系列的单词连接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
    5.跑题或不相关

    例子：There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通，大多数人都已经知道了，因而就没有必要再说出来。
    6.不知所云

    例子：Many companies began using computers mouth.
    7.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题

    例子：I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.

    句子的基本结构有问题，缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
    8.代词指代不明

    例子：If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.

    代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。
    以上就是小编跟大家分享的关于托福写作方面的内容，大家可以根据自己的实际情况有针对性的进行提高，小编在此祝大家早日取得好成绩。