语言是一门艺术，写作是创造艺术并享受艺术的过程。恰当准确地表述，语言流畅清新，遣词造句恰当准确，语法鲜少错误，是广大中国托福考生急需掌握的绝妙武功，也会在众多考卷中“脱颖而出”，赢得考官的青睐。
　　然而很多考生对自己托福写作低分的原因不太清楚，也就没有办法找到改进的地方。其实考生们在托福写作上经常会用一些差劲的句子，正是这些句子导致了大家的托福写作的低分。下面为大家整理了25个托福写作的差劲句与改进后的，供大家借鉴。

　　1. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

　　3.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　8. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　13. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　20. I felt alone.

　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　以上这25个问题句子是导致大家在托福写作中低分的主要原因，而且是大家在托福写作中最容易犯的错误，所以大家一定要引以为戒。